2010-03-06 [Tis gone but never gone]: It's good. I like it ^^ I can wait to read more :D

2010-03-06 [ArtworkA]: Really???

2010-03-06 [Tis gone but never gone]: Yes, really. I can't wait to read more.

2010-03-06 [ArtworkA]: omg wow

2010-03-06 [Tis gone but never gone]: What? You shocked at the fact that I like it? XD

2010-03-06 [ArtworkA]: Hell yeah I am. Im not that good and you are lol

2010-03-06 [Tis gone but never gone]: Hunni, listen you are a good writer, you just need to keep going with it. Even if you get bored with it just keep going but make sure you take some breaks from writing. Oh and make sure you have really good plot twist for ther story as well.

2010-03-06 [ArtworkA]: I think i have a good plot twist but Im not sure

2010-03-06 [Tis gone but never gone]: Well give it a go and if it looks wrong or sounds it then change it.

2010-03-06 [ArtworkA]: Thanks you and your right.

2010-03-06 [Tis gone but never gone]: Anytime doll ^^

2010-03-06 [ArtworkA]: ^^

2010-03-06 [Tis gone but never gone]: :D

2010-03-06 [Tis gone but never gone]: Oh me like so far ^^ Keep going! I want to know more ^^

2010-03-06 [ArtworkA]: Really? Sweet. Ha your the only on thats reading it on here.

2010-03-06 [Tis gone but never gone]: Yes really :D and Yeah I know. You want me to invite some of my friends to read this?

2010-03-06 [ArtworkA]: No not yet i wanna add more befor anyone else reads. And do you think i should talk about what emily looks like?

2010-03-06 [Tis gone but never gone]: Okay, I understand ^^ And yeah you should say what she looks like and maybe her friend too.

2010-03-06 [ArtworkA]: Yeah your right.

2010-03-06 [Tis gone but never gone]: Yep, course I'm right lolz :P

2010-03-06 [ArtworkA]: haha yeah

2010-03-06 [Tis gone but never gone]: *giggles*

2010-03-06 [ArtworkA]: I added the girls outfits and looks

2010-03-06 [Tis gone but never gone]: I saw and I thought it was good ^^

2010-03-06 [ArtworkA]: Yea :D

2010-03-06 [Tis gone but never gone]: :D

2010-03-07 [Tis gone but never gone]: so hows the story coming along?

2010-03-07 [ArtworkA]: I have a mega writers block

2010-03-07 [Tis gone but never gone]: ouch, Iam sorry hunni *hugs*

2010-03-07 [ArtworkA]: This k I ish trying to form my thoughts

2010-03-07 [Tis gone but never gone]: So what ya stuck on? I mean on the story.

2010-03-07 [ArtworkA]: About were I want this conversation to go and I keep trying to think to far a head.

2010-03-07 [Tis gone but never gone]: well write down what you want the conversation to go then make it go that way. If that makes any sence.

2010-03-07 [ArtworkA]: It does

2010-03-07 [Tis gone but never gone]: Oh good ^^ I'm not good a explaining things.

2010-03-07 [ArtworkA]: lol you seem to be elplain well to me

2010-03-07 [Tis gone but never gone]: Awww thanks ^^

2010-03-08 [Tis gone but never gone]: ooohhhh it's geting really good now ^^

2010-03-08 [ArtworkA]: Haha where do you think its going to go

2010-03-08 [Tis gone but never gone]: my money is on sex. Am I right?

2010-03-08 [ArtworkA]: Maybe O,O

2010-03-08 [Tis gone but never gone]: Am I right, right?

2010-03-08 [ArtworkA]: Your just going to have to wait in till a type it down to be seen.

2010-03-08 [Tis gone but never gone]: Oh okay *waits*

2010-03-08 [ArtworkA]: Lol

2010-03-08 [Tis gone but never gone]: lolz

2010-03-08 [ArtworkA]: *writes and writes*

2010-03-08 [Tis gone but never gone]: *waits and waits*

2010-03-08 [ArtworkA]: lol

2010-03-08 [Tis gone but never gone]: ohhh it's getting hot and steamy :P

2010-03-08 [ArtworkA]: haha

2010-03-08 [ArtworkA]: I can you help me save a story on the edge of no return?

2010-03-08 [Tis gone but never gone]: Of course ^^

2010-03-08 [ArtworkA]: Its mine vampire one. Its dying and I cant firgure out how to save it. I will type it up for you to read.

2010-03-08 [Tis gone but never gone]: Okay cool ^^

2010-03-08 [ArtworkA]: Ugh I cant seem how to start it cause the staring of it is not good. SHould I go with him already a vamp and cant remember his past but has nightmares about it. Or start of explaining his past then getting to the parts that matter. The past is long so ugh I just dont know. I am switch it from first person to 3rd

2010-03-08 [Tis gone but never gone]: Okay doll, heres what I think; lets just say the male vamp found some of his olds diarys and by reading them he could remember some bits but when he gose to sleep he dreams of them but it's more like he is re-living his past. So that way you can have him in the present life but also him dreaming and reading about his past. So that way you can more of his past into it.

I do hope that made some kinda of sence to you.

Oh and by the way do you have msn or yahoo? So that way we can talk over that cause it would be faster but also we could like call each other because I'm better at talking than tpying. XD It's just a thought but you don't need to if you don't want to.

2010-03-08 [ArtworkA]: It sure did and thanks so much cause I thought this one was a gonnar. I Have msn and yahoo but I use msn more. my email is tacosaregood1@hotmail.com

2010-03-08 [Tis gone but never gone]: Anytime doll ^^

2010-03-09 [ArtworkA]: I am going so slow with this part ha

2010-03-09 [Tis gone but never gone]: yeah ya are XD

2010-03-09 [ArtworkA]: lol do you want me to type faster??

2010-03-09 [Tis gone but never gone]: take your time with the story ^^

2010-03-09 [ArtworkA]: lol I am. I dont have writers block no more

2010-03-09 [Tis gone but never gone]: I take it the walk helped?

2010-03-09 [ArtworkA]: Sure did

2010-03-09 [Tis gone but never gone]: Yay! That's great! :D

2010-03-09 [ArtworkA]: Ha sure is. I even think I have a way to start the dream for the vampire story.

2010-03-09 [Tis gone but never gone]: That's awesome! :D

2010-03-11 [ArtworkA]: Lol this ish getting rated R. Nbody under tay age of matureity should not read. Hahah that means you Lady random Just kidding

2010-03-11 [Tis gone but never gone]: lolz XD

2010-03-11 [ArtworkA]: Lol

2010-04-19 [ArtworkA]: What you think of it so far??

2010-05-14 [HeAVenShallBuRN]: MORE MORE I WANT MORE I WANNA SEE EMILY BURN!

2010-05-16 [ArtworkA]: cant the story some and i finally have my good thoughts back.